Apply deep revision strategies to the essay given here (“Language”). Deep revision analysis involves:
– Devising a new thesis, or focus statement that is perhaps more creative or simply more well-defined; – Revising the body paragraphs of your paper to more overtly connect them to the thesis statement;
– Adding new supporting arguments that incorporate new rhetorical strategies (description, narration, compare/contrast, definition)
– Revising paragraphs that contain more than one supporting argument (see this week’s recommended reading on paragraph development)
– Constructing a new conclusion
– Length: Approximately 1500 words
– Additionally, after the revision is done, add another section, and craft a short reflection description (one to two paragraphs) describing the changes and transformations you made in undertaking this deep revision.
– This will also include information about your surface editing efforts. — this is an important part so add this section at then end titled “Reflection description”